Corie+Hahn+-+Persuasive+Speech+Evaluation

Peer Evaluations:

 Edward Cho
Self Evaluation:


===After reading the peer evaluations, I have learned that I did provide enough evidence and presented it sufficiently. I was glad that I presented my speech to the audience in a clear manner and had an audible tone so that people could comprehend what I was trying to say. The point that I was trying to convey and my opinions seemed logical and easy to follow to the audience which was essential for a persuasive speech. I also learned that my speech was convincing and that the topic was relevant and also important to the people in KIS.===

===The improvements that I shall work on in my future speeches is that I should not move around a lot as my gestures will distract the audience. If I move too much and have objects that are distracting to the audience, the audience would not get a better grasp of what I was trying to say in my speech. But overall, after reading my peer evaluations, I thought that I got my point across and the things I need to improve for the future is less usage of gestures.===