Kevin+G+Lee-+Persuasive+Speech+Evaluation

Evaluations:

Samuel Yang Corie Hahn

Lydia Ahn

Edward Cho

Phillip Song Jenny Lee

Jenice Lee

Leah Park Hajung Kim

Jason Park Sam Lee

Mady Flores

Edward Cho

Self evaluation:

Overall, I believe that i did an adequate job in introducing and attempting to convince others to see my point of view in the subject of matter. There were some strong points that i believe stood out in my presentation, but there were also some negatives. Some have told me that i spoke loudly and clearly, which was what i was aiming for. I was also hoping to convince others through simple humor here and there to catch people's attentions and according to the peer evaluations, it worked.

However, people have told me about how I was standing in a improper manner, which i did not really notice myself. Obviously it is because of my constant slouching which i will attempt to fix. Also, people have mentioned my pauses such as parts where i went, "ummm, wait," or my hand movements. All those were caused by simple nervousness that I will also attempt to improve upon. Overall i believe that i did a good job, though not excellent, in proving my point and showing people the dangers of parent's influences in our school.